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Dodge'
May 31st, 2011, 03:54
Well here it is, don't comment on the song, just tell me what you think.

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Dodge'
May 31st, 2011, 04:02
anything? :(
Sethy
May 31st, 2011, 04:04
Better than Dean's lololo.
Dodge'
May 31st, 2011, 04:10
Better than Dean's lololo.

Lolololol I know I am helping him with rendering. Here take a look at my others.


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CuteyHaxker
May 31st, 2011, 04:11
Word timing is off a little. But other than that it looks ok haha :)
Dodge'
May 31st, 2011, 04:20
Word timing is off a little. But other than that it looks ok haha :)

Yeah I think that was a problem with the render, idk sometime you need to redo it a couple times.
Divine
May 31st, 2011, 04:25
You use too much time in the song intros for unimportant text when you should be attempting to set up a story line..
Texeh
May 31st, 2011, 04:27
Love avenged sevenfold <3
Dodge'
May 31st, 2011, 04:40
You use too much time in the song intros for unimportant text when you should be attempting to set up a story line..

Thanks for the comment. I usually just don't know what to do for story lines. But meh, I did one for tears don't fall.
Dean
May 31st, 2011, 04:56
Better than Dean's lololo.

Fuck you too.

Just wait until you see mine, bro. You wish you were in it. :)

All I needed help on was publishing it. <3
Dibesjr
June 8th, 2011, 20:59
its interesting... never seen anything like that before xD but good sync made me laugh a few times :P
Jeff
June 9th, 2011, 08:20
Intro is too long.

Poor song quality.

All I saw was a black screen half the time.

All-in-all, not the best RSMV but still a good effort.

Many aspects can be improved upon.
Ew Fat Rolls
June 9th, 2011, 08:23
Yeah try to add some more clips in between the black screens
Giraffe
June 9th, 2011, 21:27
I can't even give you that nice of a comment on any of the videos you posted on here, sorry.

For the first one you had there were way too many blank spots. It would be better even if you just had a clip of you walking somewhere.

For the second one, get your mouse off of the screen and zoom in on the clips so we don't see "Walk here" in the top left corner.

For the third one, wtf...

For the fourth one, capitalize your "I". If you don't that makes the video automatically worse. Also zoom in so we don't see the border of the RuneScape client and the "cry", "walk here", etc.

Just trying to help you out for the future.
Hutch
June 9th, 2011, 21:35
Pick better music, holy shit